i love it i love the song

I liked it. It was cute, and i found that listening to the song while reading helped really get it.

But i can't help but notice that either the flashback needs to be a little more detailed or maybe changed. It seems like the change that night wasn't gradual enough.

Also you say 'student relationship' as if Hermione is still a student when in fact, according to your summary, she is a teacher like he is.

I like the concept, i just believe it could help to edit, or something, to make things make more sense

Tori

Damn! that is really fucking awesome!

interesting :)

and i dont mean that in a bad way.

potential for more?

That was great one shot!

Oh, I loved this. Of course I listened to the song on Youtube while I was reading it.

awww...that was awesome...i listened to the song and read along with the lyrics and it holds a better effect for the end i think...but really that was awesome..._..later

loved the oneshot . keep them coming please. thank you

Nice story! I really like it!

GREAT STORY! You should add more chapters to this story.

well done!