Aww! So sweet!

I hope Nagasumi and Sun can avoid Lunar's plan. They're always getting interrupted with insanity!

I hope you're planning on continuing. :-)

nice story i can't wait to read chapter 2 :)

YAY!

Seto no Hanayome!

I think you should add "by" to the end of the first paragraph as in "...who was passing by."

Also, Japanese Valentines Day is Girls-Guys only.

Because, there's another holiday, on March 14, called White Day where Guys give back to their Valentines. Amusingly, this was completely invented by companies to boost sales, and it works.

Figured I should mention this in case it was useful for you...

loved it. write more plese.

i cant wait for the next chapter

A little rushed. But that's okay, plot is still a good idea

the anime was nice ** tough i admit i liked the idea of Nagasumi ending up with Lunar and not san..

hey, nice story you have goin on here. i agree that this anime is vastly unnoticed on fanfiction and am also trying to think of ideas for what to write on it, having just started watching it myself (and it rocks). if you ever need a hand send me a message, we need to get this stuff out there :)

Moonlight Ace

I really like this series.

Nice chapter.

I've seen you captured Nagasumi's daily "life hanging by a thread" situation.

I give this story 10/10. I'm really into this series and I am so anxcious to see what happens next, PLEASE update soon.

Luna with a love potion... I'm scared.

Nice set up idea, although it's not quite the right time of year. Overall very good, keep it up.

Bis Bald

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