Update soon, this story is amazing!

continue the story pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee ez

So. You need to update this. ._. I love it. Please.

Ok, so I just wanted to let you know that this is AMAZING. I will DEFINENTLY be coming back for more! You did a great job portraying every character as they appear in the book, and you captured Ariel's personality perfectly. He's awesome :) I didn't read the second book yet, so I'm that that there were no spoilers (I think). Overall, amazing! Great work, and keep it up!

Ok, so I just wanted to let you know that this is AMAZING. I will DEFINENTLY be coming back for more! You did a great job portraying every character as they appear in the book, and you captured Ariel's personality perfectly. He's awesome :) I didn't read the second book yet, so I'm that that there were no spoilers (I think). Overall, amazing! Great work, and keep it up!

Why haven't you updated?

Water spirits always seem to have some sort of ulterior motive, and it's NEVER good.

this was so entertaining! there really should be more ELS authors here

Just like the first one, i found this chapter to be enticing and thrilling! I can't wait for more!

I love this! I loved the books, and I love your twist on them. It was fantastic, and I can't wait for more! :) (Especially if it includes more of Ariel 3)

Great story! I especially like the way you do the same theater prompts as in the books. I can't wait for the next chapter!

This is really good! I'm not sure were you're going with the plot, but I like the whole shcrimshaw crying thing you did!

Note in chapter one: Bertie is known as 'The MISTRESS of Revels' Not the 'Master of Revels'.

ohh Im intrigued! updte soon 'kay!

Look's like I'm the fist to review

Great start! It's nice to see some fanfics up for this series! Not to mention, it's nice to see another Ariel/Bertie fan! I like where you're going with this, so keep up the good work!