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TT That was so sad...waaaahhhh!

But great job! It was so deep and short and simple is how I like it. Absolutely wonderful!

Woah,that was awesome! xD

Really.. **

I liked the way you described Gokudera's emotions.. _

But..poor Gokudera.. _

What you wrote is really deep(at least for me :P ) and can make someone see things differently..

So,beautiful.. -

Well done.. _

It is sad but a little too short.