|Reviews for Tears for the Many|
| I'm Doxophobic 5/22/11 . chapter 2
I'm here again! Now it's 11:15PM (but who cares? :P)
I adore how you made everything flow naturally, and how the interaction between the characters went smoothly even with the use of in-game dialogue. I feel like I'm back a couple of years just by reading this (ah, I feel so old saying that).
Never mind that, I have to ponder, would this fic perhaps end sadly? Okay, scratch that, I wouldn't want to spoil anything.
Don't rush, I hope things go smoothly for you, too (not just with the story, I mean)!
I'm gonna lurk around until your next update then! :)
| I'm Doxophobic 5/22/11 . chapter 1
I can't believe I never left a review for this (I really can't!) and oh my what the heck was I thinking? Anyway! I'm feeling funny and not quite coherent, so forgive me for my sucky english/grammar/typos.
Okay okay, it's refreshing that Heroine took Black Pearl for the quest (I admittedly picked Elazul every. time.) because it made way for a.. well, more anticipated(?) meeting (my, I can't remember the exact word for it!).
Oh, I never really thought about the possibility of Elazul and Larc meeting down there, though I've talked to some of the dead Jumis (I can't remember exactly..), so I guess I like you for the details!
The almost last (AND last) part, with Heroine thinking of her usual (I'd like to assume it so) dream Elazul's cute (that's a good thing). Oh, and if I didn't know better, I would've widened my eyes at the part where Lisa's legs wobbled. Ha, almost got me with the teleportation spell!
P.S. That line about Heroine mocking Elazul while sleeping? I like that a lot.
| CWolf2 7/18/10 . chapter 1
This was very good. You've followed the plot from the game with adding your own unique elements to the story. Great job!
| Jelem 6/12/10 . chapter 1
It's so beautiful!
I love the way you wrote it! I love it! The way you conveyed the ideas were awesome!
This is by far my most favorite 'Teardrop Crystal' novelization...
| TheMoonclaw 6/8/10 . chapter 1
I usualy don't review unless I'm bugging people to update...lol, aren't I nice?
But I noticed that this great story has been up for awhile and hasn't gotten reviewed! I won't stand for that! :D
So I'm leaving you a review to tell you that I really like this story! It's well written and covers a lot of stuff for not being long.
It made me laugh and it was sweet too and everyone seemed in character and everything.
I actaully read this twice, that's how much I like it.
Thanks for writing it and posting it for everyone!