Very funny. And good point.

Heh. Good one.
I never thought about it, but Arwen/Luthien, in her absolute elf-wisdom, beauty, skill and just over-all perfect, really is a bit of a Mary-Sue...
I guess that's what you get for being based off of the author's wife!

That was pro. I'm in shock. I never looked at Arwen that way, Although it's true she didn't really do anything for the whole trilogy SHE REPLACED MY SWEET GLORFINDEL!SHE MUST PAY!Thank-you for (in a way) making her pay

Wow. I HATE Arwen! lol. this was pretty damn hysterical. I enjoyed it.

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lol, very good!

DEATH TO MARY-SUES! *evil grin* MWUWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA...HAHA...hah! *pulls out the soda bottle of DOOM*

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Arwen didn't just sit around, there are better things in life then fighting after all.

This story is fairly funny and I only have one nitpick in that the singular of Dunedain is Dunadan, not Dunedan. I would apprieciate it if you changed this; having Aragorn tell Mary Sue off for using the wrong term and then doing it itself is rather annoying to the reader.

Five Tsumina Stars for this story! Yay! It's really funny, and I'm glad to see that someone actually READ the book before writing a fanfic. Some people...*sigh*...they think they know everything after they've seen the movie, though half of it is a lie. I like the movie though. It's good. I'm glad someone knows that Arwen did close to nothing and if everything concerning her in the book were to be compiled, it would take less than a page. She DID sit on her butt the entire time and did nothing. I'm glad you pointed that out. I'm also glad she's dead. Okay, continue writing. I enjoy your stories.

ROTFL! THAT WAS AMAZING!

God I hate mary sues dont you? I flamed one and she (the author) got all defensive...

Yes! Death to Arwen! Stupid git messes up all the prefectly good slash.

Amusing, but I think you'll be flamed by Arwen fans. *peeks at the other reviews* Am I right?

hello, good story...i hate mary sues

you're cracked, it was intresting though

cute! i liked the first part particularly