Good fic! The smut was hot!

The part of Jasper being married and having kids had me all O_O. Poor guys.

Yummy DocWard btw!

I can't help but feel sorry for everyone involved. Poor Jasper. These 2 are just so yummy (*sigh* Major Whitlock). Great story.

S-mittens:

You surprised me there at the end, girl. I was expecting the standard smut-fest that JXE naked and grinding on each other always delivers, very satisfying in itself. Now, I ache for the both of them, and for Alice. How sad that these two halves of Jasper's life cannot come together; and that Alice cannot be told about Jasper's need for this because of societal expectations.

Good, unexpected ending to this slashy fic. I enjoyed it,and thanks for writing.

Lemony goodness; I could imagine myself right there in bed with these two twi-gods.

Hugs, Michelle

Jasper Edward HOT

really not bad for your first slash and first twific, in fact, good!

just keep writing - whichever category, clash, straight, canon, non canon

hope to read more from you soon

xx

I am not a fan of Twilight so it's FF, rarely is opened by me.

But this story is a pure pleasure to read. *purring*

You can't help but feel badly for everyone at the end.

You know the Major has a special place in my heart, so seeing him torn is hard.

Great o/s.

This is was really well written, I loved the inner turmoil Jasper is going through. You can't help but feel sorry for him for being forced to lead two lifes! I really like this, well done :)

A xx

Oooooo, this is almost as good as JRWard slash ;) Now I'll have to go find some more naughty pics of men for twitter so we can ogle them :P

Keep writing kitty kat, *chases with lemonade in her hands* Mwahahaha

omgosh, this is a great story, you should go on with it. (:

it could turn out amazing. :D

Very good. I liked it a lot.

WAH! *sniff* ... lovely story

Great bchapter I loved it.