|Reviews for You Ain't One Of Us Now|
| AbbyCade15 3/13/11 . chapter 1
Very nice. It had a nice rhyme scheme. And in your author's note, it wasn't Robert who shot Daryl. It was Jed. Good poem though.
| GetUrJollies 5/30/10 . chapter 1
Yay! I'm the first review of the first Red Dawn fanfic!
Very good poem. It had a nice rhyme scheme and rhythm. Very nice flow and it had a central story line and I understood the whole thing (a lot of times when I read an amateur poem the story is jumping everywhere and I can hardly keep up!)But you're definitley not an amateur.