Very nice. It had a nice rhyme scheme. And in your author's note, it wasn't Robert who shot Daryl. It was Jed. Good poem though.

Yay! I'm the first review of the first Red Dawn fanfic!

Very good poem. It had a nice rhyme scheme and rhythm. Very nice flow and it had a central story line and I understood the whole thing (a lot of times when I read an amateur poem the story is jumping everywhere and I can hardly keep up!)But you're definitley not an amateur.

Good job!