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SunfireEyes 2006-01-03 ch 1, anon.	abuseAw!This is so cute!I loved the ending!Go You!
RasberryGirl 2004-10-26 ch 1, anon.	abuseWhoo that dream gave me a good scare! I'm kind of dumb so I didn't realize you told everyone there was a dream sequence within the fic. Anyway, the story was really well characterized. I was afraid it might cross into some questionable incest territory but was relieved to see that it didn't! This was a good, entertaining look into Rachel's psyche.
Louise 2004-10-20 ch 1, anon.	abuseThis story is...um... looks at list of descriptive words Interesting.
Hermione 2002-08-30 ch 1, anon.	abuseDude, I'm sorry I hurt your poor delicate feelings, okay?? But I did not swear at you, and I would barely even count what I wrote as a flame, okay???
Isabella Cahill 2002-08-29 ch 1, anon.	abuseNow THAT was more in character, pretty good actually, but poor Rach. And I think that Tobias probably would have at least said something 2 her. Still, good fic
Silverblade 2002-03-27 ch 1, anon.	abuseI loved it. I think you captured Rachel's and Jake's relationship perfectly.
Malenkaya 2002-03-13 ch 1,	abuseUmmm, to be honest, you aren't the best writer ever. You're not bad, though, and you actually have good ideas. Plus, after all that slashy crap that is currently filling the internet, I really don't mind incest much. Actually, that has nothing to do with this fanfic. Anyways. Wierd beggining, I didn't really like it much. The ending was good, though. And WTF was up with that reply to that other person's comments? What the hell do you think that the reviewing is for? People get flamed sometimes. Accept it, and move on.
KITTYKAT246 2002-03-05 ch 1, anon.	abuseTHAT WAS GOOD ,MUCH BETTER THAT THAT BLOOD IS THICKER THAT WATER **.
Shellback 2002-02-26 ch 1,	abuseI'm not a big fan of incest but the story was good. I personally don't like R/J fics meself. You certainly do have good ideas but I think what Hermoine was trying to say was that this piece of literature LACKED in the quality department. I'd recommend a pre-reader next time, or re-read it yourself and edit what needs to be fixed. And if you can't take criticism don't post. You got all upset over someone saying your not a good writer? Well I'm just glad you don't write Eva fictions or you'd be in tears. I have seen NOTHING here that qualifies as a 'flame'. And you have no right attacking Hermoine to such a degree as you did, though I think she could have been a little more specific as to how one such as yourself could improve as a writer.
Tiger5913 2002-02-26 ch 1,	abuseWow, I thought this was gonna be another one of your J/R fics! Well, this fic was really good. ^.^ The dream was scary, vivid, and I'm glad that Rachel didn't ~really~ kill Jake though.
Opal Amari 2002-02-22 ch 1,	abuseIgnore the hethians... I've read your other fics, and personally, I think this is the best one. Great work! Hanni B TCLDOW
Polar Bear 2002-02-18 ch 1, anon.	abuseIt's not bad. Could use some work, but not bad. (and I hate to point this out, but Rachel had this conflict laid on her shoulders by Crayak, if I recall correctly.I think it was gone over at least once by KA.)
Milenko 2002-02-14 ch 1,	abuseGive the guy a break. I mean, I wouldnt want a review that told me i sucked at writing, would any of you? I'm sure he meant to review the story, not him as a person.
The Critical Critic 2002-02-14 ch 1, anon.	abuseI cannot agree with Temrash 113 more. You DID write "Like it? ect." at the bottom; therefore, you shouldn't be surprised when you get a bad review. Let me ask you something. Did Hermione give you one cuss? No, she didn't. So what makes you think that you have the right to call her "jackass" and her fics "dog "? I remember that review you wrote for M.C.'s fic on her/his opinion of #54. Something about how "No one gives a fk about your opinions." If you can't keep your nasty opinions to yourself, don't go knocking off other people when they give you nasty opinions. To be quite honest, you aren't a good writer. I liked the story, and you have good ideas, like Hermione said, but you are not a good writer. A good writer would reply calmly and collectively to a bad opinion. He/she would not diss ANYONE just because of a flame. Everyone gets flames, even high-self-regard writers like you. So get over it. Because those that you offend will most certainly one day have your account locked. Thank you.
Temrash 113 2002-02-14 ch 1, anon.	abuseYou shouldn't feel better. If people not liking you or your work is more than you can handle, that's proof that you're not ready to submit it to the public. At the bottom of the story, you said "Like it? Love it? Hate it? Any review is appreciated. Tell me what you think." If you're not prepared for people to do that, then wait until you're mature enough to deal with people's opinions not matching your own, then post.

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