Wow, this was a really good chapter: it was action packed and had plenty of emotion in it as well. I have to say that the image of a huge trench and moat fortification holding off tons of pokemon is a pretty insane battle to imagine. Not to mention the fact that Eddy's Chimchar kicked some major Pawniard and Bisharp ass.

The battle between Werewolf and that Breloom was well done, and I really felt like he was fighting for his life and that of May's Bibarel. I was pretty sad to see that Werewolf had to die, but I agree with you that it was a pretty epic way to go out. At least Ed got a little revenge on the Breloom, I guess.

A great chapter, and I can't wait to see the next one!

Wow. What a good chapter. Although I already knew Ed's Bieberal was going to die (I saw the trainer cards on your Deviantart page), but atleast he went out with a bang.

Anyways, looking forward to the next chapter. (I'm still glad Pokemon aren't real.)

The ending was pretty emotional. I actually felt like a blast of emotion just overwhelmed me. I loved the battle! It felt like a real war zone was taking place. Eddy's Chimchar was badass. Although I can't give constructive criticism. I will say that this chapter was the most saddest one for me yet. Rest in peace Werewolf.

Cool I like this story cause Eddy seems to be the main character! My fav goes here!

Wow, at first I thought you were dead or gave up on the story. This story never seems to surprise me. It always makes me laugh with it's dark humor. As always, great work.

Well, this was a pretty entertaining chapter as well as very interesting. I like how Lee was all like "Hahahaha no" when May said they should stay and watch the Bibarels; I laughed pretty hard at that. And I guess there's going to be one helluva epic battle next chapter considering the fact that there are literally hundreds of pokeballs raining out of the sky. Good job on a really funny chapter, and I can't wait to see what exactly is going to happen when the pokemon in those pokeballs pop out and pay the kids a visit.

Lol. This chapter was funny in some parts, probably because of the Kankers' and Ed's reaction to Ed's Bibarel and May's Bibarel's "Time" together.

But anyways, I can't wait for big fight next chapter!

In all honesty this chapter was ok I mean Ed's and May's Bibarel meeting up could develop their relationship some how, You progressed the plot with the villians sligtly, and Eddy did seem like less of an asshole until the end seriously i'll never get over that Eddy is acting like a friken seventh grader for no apperrent reason I hope you have a reallly good reason for why Eddy's acting like this and that he actually developes into a better person later in the story

I really hate Eddy. If I could I'd murder him with my Tyranitar.

Well, I finally finished reading all eight chapters that you've posted up so far, and I have to say, it's a really entertaining story. It's also really violent and has a crap ton of cussing in it, but that actually adds to the charm of the story, in a strange kind of way.

And Eddy is a super asshole in this story, perhaps more than I've EVER seen him in any other Ed, Edd, n' Eddy story I've read. It's actually pretty funny though, except when he wants other people's pokemon to die and and crap like that.

Good so far, so keep up the good work. And thanks for the explanation at the end of Chapter Eight about pokemon always having existed in this story, because I was slightly confused at some points without that information.

This is actually a good dark and realistic it up dude.

I've just recently found this series and i like it the way you portray pokemon seems realistic but eddy is the one thing i hate about this story he is such a giant FuckHole that i'd wish you'd fouces more on Johnny or Kevin but it is probably one of the best stories i've read on this site.

P.S: Are Red and Lucas going to show up in this story?

First off on the review: I'm sorry I flipped out on you.

Sure, I was appaled at first, but actually you've shed some depth on the characters that we don't see in the show. Plus, I think that the shock could actually keep you readers reading to see what happens next.

But one word can summerize this chapter: DAMN! I mean, seriously, that was flipping amazing! I'm still shaking from the intensity of the battle.

In conclusion: Yes, I've sucked it up, became a man, and tolerated this chapter, which was great.

I'm also glad that Pokemon aren't real.(Lol)

If your still accepting OCs, then I'd have a go.

Name: Seth Garrus

Trainer Class: Ace Trainer

Age: 15

Wi-Fi Code: 5623-4707 7325

Pokemon: Sceptile, Electivire, Floatzel, Infernape, Honchcrow, Hitmonchan

(P.S Each level is , meaning if character is used again)

please consider it.

Brilliant, you've finally updated. Cool, but you seem to have a tendancy to exagerate the characters personallity (It's just constructive critizim)

This is a Pokemon distribution chart for Ed Edd n Eddy (Joke)

Pokemon/EEnE pokemon distribution chart

Incorrect Formula

EdSlow/Dumb

EddGay/Weak/Retarded

EddyStrong/Powerful

Corrected Formula

EdStrong/Bulky

EddAwesome/Cool

EddyGay/Weak/Retarted

Example:

Incorrect Formula

StarterOther

Ed:CharizardCamerupt

Edd:EmpoleonLedian

Eddy:TyphlosionElectivire

Correct Formula

StarterOther

Ed:BlastoiseSteelix

Edd:SceptileHitmontop

Eddy:MeganiumAzumarill