Gramatically and sttructurally well-written, you might want to consider the effects of Harry's torture. I don't know about you, but if I had my leg smashed 26 times by a sledgehammer, I wouldn't be moving, much less trying to escape for a very long time! Also, how could Harry get out of the cell at first but not later? Voldie put the spell on him already (and what happened to the laughing spells). Just a few things to think about before you do the next chapter! Keep going!

Kelly

Wow! This is getting quite wonderful. Love the hurtaholic (N/O) themes going on here and the dark humor. (If I may call it that) Poor Sleighy and Donnelly. Cannot wait for Sevvie to come in! BTW, do you do archives? -*AO

So SAAAAAAAAAAAD! Poor Harry... I wonder how Sirius and the others are dealing with this? Do they know he's gone yet? UGH... this was so sad. Update soon!

I beg you to continue as soon as possible, because I love the story.

So thats where Harry got the Moldyworts thing from. More please.

Oh no! That's so sad! And what will happen to poor Harry now? Please continue quickly!

*growl* That. Wasn't. Fair. Life isn't, I know, but this just sucks. Voldie is a bastard, but I like the story. Post more soon? I wanna see Snape!

that was great... truly bloody!

OOO! I like dis one! Keep it up!

yhey,

this fic is really well written, but is this tears, torture, sadness going anywhere? i don't think ppl will read this fic anylonger if there's a long chapter only on torture and no advancing on the story.

anyway, plz... go on.. cuz u've got me hooked ..;)

Man! This is real, good, wonderful and sadistic angst!