Wow. This is such a twisted story. At times it feels so unrealistic, but then something comes up that makes me feel like I'm actually watching everything happen. It's just so... so... surreal. I couldn't stop reading it.
I am also fascinated by the possible workings of the time traveling marauders. How is it that Harry still exists if James is out of his own time? How is the fabric of time still holding together with two Siriuses(Sirii)? How is it that the HPverse hasn't fallen into a complete AU without James and Sirius in the timeline? Sounding a bit too much like Hermione now. Sorry about that.
In any event, I can't wait for the next chapter. And the next, and the next. Especially when (if?) Harry is rescued. What will his friends think of the boy he has become? Will he be able to physically heal? What about the whole edging-on-insanity thing? Enough with the questions. Good luck with the next chapter. May you find the time to update soon.
I love your story!
K.G.
anonymous 5/26/07 . chapter 7
i really liked it, but the last 2 chapters (with only hermione and the others) was really boring, sorry but i couldn't care less what was in harry and hermiones boring usless letters, except maybe the one where he told her he had to get out! update soon!
Aeris 4/25/07 . chapter 7
*Whimpers* /Please/ update! I've read this about three times, and I'm gonna die if I don't see what happens to Harry! I absolutely love this, you have an amazingly unique and wonderful style of writing. I spent all day thinking about his before finally reading it again. Your other fics are wonderful too, but this is one of my very favorite Harry Potter fanfics ever! It combines "poor Harry" and funny dialogue. I've never found any other authors that could do that, at least any that approached the degree of finesse and skill you've attained. I'm unceasingly praying that you're just taking a really, really long time to update and haven't stopped writing this. Amazingly, I can't find any faults in this, except that there isn't nearly enough of it, and a few questions about Harry being able to do some things, but not others, but I trust you for the latter, and I know that there are probably a thousand different explanations for it, and I'm still holding out for the former to be fixed. Is there anything at all I could bribe you with? I'm a decent author, and I'd write anything at all for you that you wanted, I'd leave reviews with every other author I know about how wonderful you are, I'd do /anything/ within my power, if you'll just say that you'll continue this! It doesn't have to be now, it doesn't have to be in a week, it doesn't have to be in a month, it doesn't even have to be in a year, just /sometime/ write more! /Please/ don't give up on this! It's too good to be given up on!
I'm sorry, I don't know if this is the type of review you appreciate, authors are funny about which kind they like, I just thought you didn't have /nearly/ enough reviews for this good of a fic, so I just had to add my own. I really like the way you do scenes like you did between Sirius and Dumbledore and some between Harry and Severus, and your original characters are really brilliant, you couldn't have picked two better people to die in front of Harry...sorry if that sounded a little morbid. _ I think you're doing a really good job with Morpheus, and I'm really curious about what happened with his uncle when Harry was six, and what else happened during his childhood with the Dursleys. I also can't help but not want Harry to be permenantly crippled and disfigured, so I hope his leg and hand get fixed, eventually. He can be scarred from head to toe, just no shriveled limbs. _ Sorry again if this isn't the type of review you like, or if you don't like nitpicking, you just didn't say an awful lot about what kind of review you like, like other authors do (not that that's a bad thing!), and so I'm just trying to use several different tactics, hoping I'll hit on one that you'll like. _ Here goes another one:
*Squeals* This is so amazing! I love it so much! *Showers S. Thanatos with chocolate and pocky* You're so great and amazing, I want to give you all my possessions (not that that's a lot)! *Bounces up and down and huggles S. Thanatos* Writemorewritemorewritemore! I /love/ the way you portray your characters!
Was that any better? Not that it's not true! It is, and I'm really sorry if you didn't like any of this, I'll try to do better next time! Thank you so much for writing such an amazing story and posting it so all of us could enjoy it!
-Aeris
vintage 2/6/07 . chapter 7
witty comebacks indeed. i love you're story, it was so much fun to read. Characters are spot on, and the plot moves well, there's not a dull moment! It was also truly brilliant the way you keep Harry strong and sarcastic even throughout all the crap he has to put up with. I even laughed out loud on a couple of his comments. So WITTY!
I can even go along with the James and Sirius plot insertion, with them flying into the future because you executed the idea so well. I thought 'Hey now that's original!' . But for heaven's sakes, the last you updated was in 2005! Dear me! I was really enjoying this story, it would be such a shame to learn you didn't have the heart to finish it, especially when the story line seemed to be picking up. I hoping that maybe, you will have a change of heart and continue. Please? Pretty Please? For the sake of all your reviewers, will you continue? I beg you, don't let such a wonderful story go unfinished, it's...it's criminal!
Hoping wistfully to see an update-
vintage
Aeris 1/23/07 . chapter 7
I love this story, please finish it! It's one of the best HP fics I've seen, and I'm dying to see more of it! You did manage to take things that wouldn't work well in other fics and make them perfect in this one. This is my second favorite HP fic, and I'm going to be checking to see when you update, so please hurry! And get back to Harry and Snape please!
So far I'm really liking this story.. though not sure where you're going with the james and sirius thing.. it was fine before they came along but eh makes it more interesting.. can't wait to read more