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littlemissstarkid 5/19/12 . chapter 7
It's hormaNAL, not hormoNIC. Just saying.
dadby 5/8/12 . chapter 7
I LOVE LOVE YOUR STORY! SO AWESOME AND CUTE WITH HARMONY! H/HR FOREVER!
Lielac 3/20/09 . chapter 4
*snicker* Cassandra is such a reversal of a Mary Sue...

Seriously, she is. Tries to woo Harry (and in the 'regular' Suefics, succeeds), and takes out the 'bad guys'.

... Except for two things. A, she's an evil BITCH who's taking out the competition for taking over the world, and b, Harry's like 'eugh get away'.

... Oh, and she's a carbon succubus. DUH.
artdiva89 8/5/08 . chapter 7
i loved the ending! it was so sweet

animeluvr89
artdiva89 8/5/08 . chapter 6
how could cassandra get into the chamber of secrets? does she know parseltongue too?

animeluvr89
artdiva89 8/5/08 . chapter 5
Harry contacting Voldemort? No way would that happen in the books!

animeluvr89
artdiva89 8/5/08 . chapter 4
kissing cho? that's a little weird...

is she pretty much going to go after EVERYONE that has hurt harry?

animeluvr89
artdiva89 8/5/08 . chapter 2
okay, i'm all for malfoy being out of the picture and everything but... WHAT THE HELL DID SHE DO TO HIM?

animeluvr89
artdiva89 8/5/08 . chapter 1
not bad.. but it seemed like you were trying to rush this chapter a little bit. Overall I liked it, especially the kissing scene and harry being shocked.. "

animeluvr89
Midnight Callwel 2/10/08 . chapter 7
Hi.I love your the Mage Knigths trilogy and Bethroted.I keep reading them over and you could create diffrent characters for the Mage Knigths series and have it published.
CrimsonAngel1992 3/11/06 . chapter 7
i love it
mcabello 11/27/05 . chapter 7
Good fic. Write more soon
DarkMoon1301 11/15/05 . chapter 7
i really liked it. wait... thats wrong... i didnt like it at all. i luved it!
Sirithtalwen 8/15/04 . chapter 7
mer! i loved it! so sweet and yet so interesting with Cass... i wish she didnt die and like the mum did the contract thingy and a sequel when i guess Cass would have gotten out of Azkaban... but i loved it!
angel13 7/15/04 . chapter 7
the story is great
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