Interesting

:-)

:) :) :)

Intrigued!

uh great second chap- it will be nice to see how this story builds up

I'm guessing Bella's a hybrid, and Katherine & William's parents were killed by vampires. Interesting story! Thanks for writing!

well, I just finished your story and it left me really really thrilled. I'm not familiar with twilight, as I've neither read the books nor seen the movies, but the noment I start going through your story I felt like I couldn't stop :D

The chapters were always long so I think you provided us with adequate information about the characters' past and present, leaving me -for the first time xD- without any questions at all :)

The story now was full of lovely unexpected twists that always made me look forward to the next chapter. I especially liked Bella's unique feature of being something between a vampire and a human, as well as her power...which reminds me of how much I loved the flashbacks you included in those dreams/visions she had :)

As for her little romance with Edward is cute and his need to always protect quite adoracle. However, I like the fact that this is a Bella-eccentric story and you preffered to expand on her thoughts, decisions and life instead to focusing on another fluffy tale :p I mean, making Edward only another part of her -definitely one of the most important and beloved ones- allowed us to know more about her relationship with kat & william (btw, i'd like to see some more "besties'" moment here) and with her parents, where the most interesting part of the story lies for me.

At first thought Aro was one of the bad guys - at least i hoped so, given the fact i'm a sucker for drama and angst xD - but then we learned that his her father and my jaw dropped :o The opposite happened when we were to meet her mother, as I was more than waiting for her to appear like this :p but her twin sister? well, that was some of a surprise and i have the feeling nikol might have been quite influnced by the dark side she was forced to develop in the dungeon ;)

all in all, a well- written , easy to follow fanfic that I'm sure has a lot in store for us in the next part...

keep it up :))))

excellent story. i like what you did with aro.

Great story. I'm glad there is a sequel.

That is definitely a different Aro than we are use to.

Good chapter.

You are doing a fantastic job with this story.

Good chapter.

Poor Bella. Great writing.

Katherine is acting like the female version of Jake.