In the chapter the editor sounds like a man who likes little girls...no offense ...

What the hell? Sabrina is TWELVE YEARS OLD! Seriously - why would you choose Sabrina as the love interest, Nabokov?

Also, how did The Editor come to have this change of heart so suddenly? Things don't work like that. He should have better motivation!

oooooo. very nice. I like it when author's invite some Puckabrina into their stories.

I don't know if it was supposed to be funny, but this chapter was!

Ewwwww. He's pedophile. But this is a very interesting story. Can't wait to finish it. Hope you don't mind so many reviews.

So this is the end, and the Editor was fighting with Puck and they got hurt and neither of them really won, am I right?

you know, the Editor was right. THere was no reason for Sabrina to be locked up.

A lot of the words you use are ones that msot people wouldn't use when speaking normally, I've noticed. Like quarrel. I know no one who uses that word on a daily basis.

That's slightly pedophilesque.

What does rancorous mean?

ANd he gets out! Yay! ...OR uh oh...

The Editor is having a change of heart! The only things I think you might want to fix are that some of the time the Editor doesn't talk the same way he does in the book, and in the second paragraph, where it says had got cavities, it should either be had gotten or got.

DENTISTS! Nobody died! Sigh... I think they should have killed each other. I would have found that hilarious. :D XD

Pay no attention to me...

Anyway, great finale! I really want to see what the sequel holds!

Mwa ha ha. Puck and the Editor engaged in a bloody duel! AWESOMENESS!

this was really good! BUT IT'S OVER! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO... *regains composure* i thought it was sorta creepy that the editor told sabrina that he loved her, but it was soooooo good! I can't wait for the next one!