Ah, who doesn't love a good Tony-whumping? This was a lot of fun to read-not least because it reminded me of some stuff I've written; why do we enjoy hurting our favorite characters so much? Thanks for posting and all your hard work.

hello :)

very nice story :**

you did a good job:)

hope youll write more stories :*

greetings from germany :*

Poor Tony all this b/c he had to go back and get his bag.

Just when he and Gibbs think they found a safe place. It turn out to be not so good of a place at least for Tony.

I love when people they just meet think Tony and Gibbs are father and son. Its not hard to think that when they act or seem like it. They are a perfect fit together. Aww Tony told Gibbs he think of him as a father.

Good story.. Hope you write later lotsa hurt/Tony!:D

That was a good story. Thank you-

I hope this woman stays one of the good guys.

Gibbs is just such a dad-

It's never a good idea to keep Abby in the dark about injuries...

Poor Tony- at least Gibbs has come to the rescue.

Great ending to a wonderful and very interesting story. Great job.

Thank you for finishing this story. I had been waiting for it. I enjoyed it. Tracy

AWWW!

that was soo cute, your Tony and Gibbs fanfic was one of my favorite, cheers and keep writing

Great chapter! Nice ending.

That ending has left me with a huge smile and tears running down my face. Tony would most definitely blame himself for putting Gibbs in danger and vice versa...perfect. Lisa was creepy and to have 17 bodies...I hate it when that number is connected to a negative thing but I take it because it just means that 2 more were not added to that number. She's lucky to be dead already...one bullet and a quick end vs. Gibbs getting his hands on her after what he found out everything she had done to Tony...doubt age and gender would have helped her out. Ewan was who I figured sang like bird...and a good thing he sang too, he may get a slightly lighter sentence instead of being charged as a murder accomplices. Great ending and I hope your trip here to the good ol' U.S. of A. is fun...and take care. 10/10

that was an oscar winner chapter! thank you sp much for this excellent story!