PLEASE UPDATE SOOOOOOON!

Did you edit the fic a bit? I remember the last time I read through this, Cloud had told Vincent that he as a grandfather. Oh well, it's still fantastic.

Update soon!

A little constructive criticism since you didn't have a beta reader for this chapter:

The blond frowned, but nodded slightly. "I will stop you again if I need to."

An elegant silver eyebrow rose. "And you think you can? You've never truly faced me before, you realize."

This statement isn't really true. Cloud faced the real Sephiroth at Nibelheim and, while neither was in good condition at the end of the encounter, I would say he won even though at that time he was not enhanced.

excellent chapter mostly I appreciate the way you are taking yur time telling it, not rushing anything-

I'm glad to see that you didn't abandon your awesome story. Can't wait to read the next chapter. And I wonder how Sephiroth will react when he learns the truth about Rune and what happened to Cloud. However, there was a small mistake in chapter 4: All mammals , females as well as males, have mammal glands, so..., well I suggest simply to google 'male lactation' (or look in Wikipedia for it) and you'll see what I mean. :-)

Ahhh... *sigh* This was fantastic, and set Sephiroth's base with the other's wonderfully. You're brilliant!

I absoultely giggled in surprised delight when I saw you had updated! I can't believe it had been a year... but i'm so glad you've come back! Cloud and Seph m-preg stories are a dime a dozen but finding one with a decent plot is pretty much non-existant... plus the kid, is ALWAYS a daughter you have earned all my attention from the beginning when the kid was born a boy. I'd never loved somebody so much as in that moment. Also the fact that it's not one of those sappy magical love at first sight stories also continues to add the magnificence, you know, the kind where everybody is all goo-goo eyes from the beginning and suddenly there's a magic genie baby that's always a girl who turns out to be the family princess in what's sure to become the perfect family... oops sorry ranting. Anywho, I love your original well thought out story and soooo much extra love for you for coming back to it. 3 3 3

I'm so glad you updated! I had to re- read it to refresh my memory and your new chapter was amazing! Its great that your not giving up on this story. It has a lot of potential. I can't wait for seph to meet rune . please update soon!

Finally, you've updated welcome back! I'm really appreciated it you updated thank you!

I'm glad to see this continue and I hope that life won't keep you up so much anymore. Your a/n sounds like a horror to me, you seriously should slow down a little if you can *offers a hug* ! Good luck!

Um, wow. That was fantastic timing on my part.

I love this so much... 3

PLEASE TELL ME YOU HAVEN'T ABANDONED THIS

such a good fic, more please

love your writing. cannot wait to see what comes next.

Of other pairings. Maybe more VincentxCloud or otherxCloud. Sorry this a continuation of previous review. That's what I get for doing it on a phone.