Wow, this fic was so old O_O

Anyway, love this very mood. This fic really well written, and I love it very much ;_; Tir deserve happiness, really.

This story...made me cry.

I just love a Tirxkasumi fic.

a wonderful story.

well written.

Im glad I was finally able to review it.

go0d job!

I've read this fics for ages and have re-read it thousand times and still saying that...THIS IS GREAT! I really like how you potray Kasumi and Tir -not sappy, but touching-. I wish they explain a bit about their relationship in Suiko 3 or onwards..but I guess they never do it. Good job, please write more!

Woo ho! I like it! But...*sniffles* I wish I could find a Riou/Eilie fanfic like tis'!I'll read a fanfic of it even though it's a 9,9,9 words!

The Riou and Eilie pairings are just so...rare! Well,I still love tis'!

_- ;D

Chaos Zero here. I must say I enjoyed this fic very much. Funny you mention Yuffie and Vincent. They happen to be my fave "couple" of all time. Of course, that means AFTER aging, among other things that mucst happen for THOSE two to work out.

I can see what happened to Tir and Kasumi actually happen between them. They are my fave Suikoden couple.

Keep at it. Very good read.

Hm...very good, I must admit. You have a definite talent that shouldn't go to waste. The romance was visible enough without being overly sappy, and the pain that I'm sure always existed between Kasumi and Tir in their relationship was well portrayed as well. I've always been frustrated that Suikoden has yet to explain fully the relationship, but...At any rate, great job, and I look forward to your future works.

Good work. Is very hard finding stories about Suikoden. Especially in the romance field. Do you ever thing they will explain their "love" in Suikoden 3? I have the feeling it won't. Anyway keep up the good work.

Excellent!

Beautifully told story!

Suikoden romantic fan fictions with a McDohl/Kasumi pairing are so hard to find.

*has read it in RpGamer... and was planning to send mail... things like that* *smiff smiff* This was so sweet.. makes me want to rush to the nearest game store and grab a *gasp* Japanese version of Suikoden I. *face it they only have that one.. no English...baaah...* Anyway, this was... deliciously long! I always love long fanfics! And this was very, very intresting! I wonder if I'll ever see a Riou/Eilie fanfic like this in future...

Beautiful, I absolutely *LOVED* this fic. Excellent work, probably the best Suikoden fic I've read, ever. It wasn't overly sappy or cute, I think it was just perfect. Writen wonderfully, you did a great job *adds to her favorites as she heads out*

Quite a good story. I thoroughly enjoyed it.

Hmm... cliche, yes, but it was not over-cute. Maybe because you're a guy, you thought that it was over-cute... not at all...

No need fro you to be embarrass of the fact of the *romance*. You should be proud! I don't know many guys (who're not gays) can write a decent romance fics...

And Miguel, I don't think he talked too much about himself. That's his part anyway, his Author's note. He could always give comments, credits, and how the fics in his point of view, that is Author's note for...

... (isn't it?)

And you bellow there! Yes, you, Bananas, don't insult Luc! He's the greatest character ever in Gensui series! (Calm herself down)

Well, Mr. Jonathan, I must applause your effort in writing, good descriptions, and pairings, good ideas, but need more emotions (that... from my POV as a girl)

Good luck and I hope this don't make you stop writing romance!

Regards,

Ferrum

yea you do make mcdohl seem alot like vincent...and luc...LUC! i hate that guy..oh yea your story i give it a 7/10 at least its not humor..cause in those fics most authors think their humor is so funny...which when i read leaves me scratchin my head in confusion.

Brave for succeeding where I had yet to complete.

I thought this was a nice one. You talked about yourself a little too much at the beginning and end, but the story itself was good.