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| Neumzie 2008-03-18 ch 24, | abuseomg flitwick!?!?!roflmao! NICE! he(and you) are now my heros lol |
| Neumzie 2008-03-18 ch 23, | abuseactually "lateris" means "brick" so idk where the hell that came from lol. actually, if you type in "you do not know the poewr of the dark side" into a translator, it comes out as "Vos operor ignoro vox of atrum pars" |
| Neumzie 2008-03-17 ch 9, | abuseyou mentioned filch and snape patrolling the halls. i thought you might like to add a note saying something about that lol, since snape is nowhere to be found at the moment |
| Neumzie 2008-03-16 ch 6, | abuseugh. the thing about things like kissing tips is that, if you only follow those strict guidelines theres absolutely no passion. its all the same, monotonous kiss over and over again (although that saliva thing is dead on lmao) |
| The Gandhara 2008-03-07 ch 29, | abuseVery good story. Nice pace, well placed mysteries, action, and good use of the characters. I also like details like the subplot with the Dr. Zog book. It may seem superfluous to some, but I think a story is better if it's not reduced to the essential facts, so to speak. Definitely, FFnet favorites lists are a good feature. They make easier to find stories like this, which were finished long ago and won't come back to the front of the category for new readers to enjoy. That's why I check them sometimes, and that's why I'm adding this fic to mine. |
| wondergirl9879 2008-02-17 ch 29, | abuseBrilliant story! You're a wonderful writer and capture/convey character emotions really well. I felt as though you understood all of the different characters, and wrote them as JK Rowling would. Great story! |
| topspin320 2008-02-04 ch 5, | abusegreat story, keep up the good work |
| lunalovegood1144 2007-12-05 ch 1, | abuseSo far so good. |
| hp-gw4e 2007-10-22 ch 29, | abuseeven though it is about 4 yrs old now, this is a really good story! |
| Loyd1989 2007-10-11 ch 29, | abuseHave you started the sequel? Is it done? I would love to read it. Loved this story and how it ended. Awesome plot and storyline. |
| Adri 2007-08-26 ch 29, anon. | abuseI love this story! I've sent it to all of my friends. I don't know if you ever wrote the sequel but could you send me the link? Thank you for writing this and good job! |
| Clell65619 2007-08-15 ch 9, | abuseI know I'm late to this party, but the story is facinating so far. |
| jean 2007-08-11 ch 16, anon. | abusei love your story its so awesome my doesnt like me but im crazy about them your a little J.k. Rowling |
| emmacat1234 2007-07-23 ch 29, | abuseGreat Story! Im gonna start reading the next one. |
| dragon drop 2007-07-08 ch 2, anon. | abusethis chapter is pretty good. |