Nice start. I find myself intrigued. I am a dedicated H/G shipper but it is difficult to find stories that hold my interest. I feel that this story might just suit. I like the way you write.

Lesley~

I've read this far because I like the idea of the story, but I really don't like Ginny's characterization in this. She seems way off base from the books. In fact, it seems like everyone is on point except her, and that's weird, seeing as she's one of the main characters. I know she's pretty, but I'm trying to figure out why Harry likes her otherwise. Her attitude problem is really annoying, and she's always snapping at someone. The Ginny in the books just seemed way more carefree and Young. She seemed Young and innocent, even after she had her run-in with Riddle's diary.

It made no sense at the end of the story when you said that Harry lost his powers and that he was a Muggle. In the real book he never lost his power. Besides that I thought the story was very good and well written.

I loved your story. I guessed that it would be his powers he'd lose, poor Harry. Now I'll have to go and read the sequal :P

Oh yeah I'm good. I guessed he was a soul searcher at the beginning of the chapter :D

Hmm...I don't trust Pauline. I wonder if there's anything dodgy about that brcacelet...

But how did Ron and Harry get past the enchantments on the girls' staircase?

Why would a smurf make her slap him? :P

Krum went after him? Why am I suspicious...

Loved the Victor Krum idea :)

I think, your have a fairly good writing style,
but Harry and Ron are too much OOC in this chapter,
so I had to review.
Harry would not have waited till the next morning to go and find Ginny.
Harry would have gone alone on his broom if he couldn't persuade Hermione to set the portkey to activate now.
I know it is harsh, but the way you let your characters act in this chapter was crap

Didnt Ginny borrow Harry's cloak ? so how does he have it back to use it to invade the castle ?

Once again, i feel like a top notch idiot for insisting on reviewing this so long after it was written and posted, but oh well. Sad, but appropriate, in my opinion anyway. It's nice to see a story where Harry doesn't get to live a happily ever after, even if he does deserve it. Of course i'm sure you've gone about fixing that up a bit in the sequal i've yet to read, but a different kind of 'ending' such as this is refreshing. So now i'm off to start in on that sequal.
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so you wrote this story what... 5,6 years ago? So i feel i bit silly leaving a review, but anyway, i just wanted to say it's nice to see your reference to LOTR, specifically the Tengwar and runes. A freind of mine and i worked out how to use it a bit and frankly it's nice to see that we're not the only ones who paid it any mind. :) It's also a plus that i know exactly what you (ginny) are referring to when you mention the vowels in this chapter and that i can actually get a picture of it. When you first brought up the runes and flowey script my first thought was of the Tengwar, which was later confirmed in your authors note. k so i suppose that's enough babble about LOTR and made up languages.
The story is pretty good, it's been worth the read so far, which is refreshing and i'm looking forward to getting started on the next chapter. :)
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Icky ending! It feels uncomplete! But your story was very well written, good plot, and good character traits and development : )