Well, I liked it.

Good luck & best wishes,

Hououza

Note to self: Never allow anyone-especially someone I have the hots for-install audio surveillance equipment in my room. Although I a teensy bit suspicious of Relena's motives in this. She's not as sweet and innocent as Heero seems to think. t is just possible that she's using this as a seduction technique...Cinnamon.

good fic but yeah ur right it needed work and you can keep the rating at T with a small warning beause even though we know she is masterbating its not graphic to the point where an M rating is needed

Not lame...very curious on how Heero goes about "sleeping on it" Don't see any reason to change to M now if you put in the actual scene then M would be a good idea... (wink) Cheers!

Bloodfire87

cute! :D

now you need one where relena is in trepidation the next day wondering if heero heard her or not, and him being terribly awkward around her. she could then get impatient and be bold and flat out ask him if he heard her...doing her business...and he can cue said spit take. lmao.

hahahaha funny but great :)

wish i could get some more story though...

Seems like little Heero ain't the brightest in this neck of the woods...lol! And she might have not been asleep but awake...neeways, would have loved a little more story. Good job!

BUSTED

Heh, amusing to say the least. Thanks for the chuckle late at night.

I LOVE IT. It's even more fun when she makes him this flustered without ever knowing it, huh? xD