|Reviews for What ever happend to Ginger|
| Guest 2/27/13 . chapter 7
Rather nice. Continue it!
| StrawberryShortcake7879 1/24/13 . chapter 1
I havent read much fanfictions and dont know much yet but this one of th best
| Guest 12/28/12 . chapter 6
I love your story. it is really touching. thank you.
| Karry 10/4/12 . chapter 3
The names are wrong;no one in England was called Marybeth in the 1890's and Dalila is not a horse name used in England during that period either It would Dalila and I not "me and Dalila" and sorry to correct your grammar but it is slices and pieces not slice's and piece's - they are not possessive nouns so you don't need an apostrophe . Okay was not in usage in the English language in the 1890's and you can't begin a sentence with a preposition i. , But , Also, etc . Anna Sewell would have observed the correct use of English Grammar of the period .
It's not a bearing ring , it's a bearing rein but I did like the "and cared not for fashion" as that was in the correct idiom for the period
I think you have the right idea , you just need to polish your grammar and also do research into popular English names for both people and animals for the 1890's and remember not to let Americanisms into your writing if you are writing in an idiom of England circa 1890 - keep at it , I like the idea that Ginger lived !
| Guest 10/2/12 . chapter 5
u need to spell went like this: went
| black love 10/2/12 . chapter 4
this is really good you sould make them all into a bok in rl (real life)
| Spindrift 5/6/12 . chapter 7
This would be better with longer chapters. Take another look at the book, and you'll see that the chapters are generally a few pages rather than just a few paragraphs. You're giving us Ginger's thoughts, but no real description of where she is or the people she's with.
Also, your spelling and grammar need work.
You've got what could be a great story here. It just needs polishing.
| iloveVJ 7/7/11 . chapter 1
That was a good story. I like how you described Gingers dead you right more!
| MovieDreamer 1/12/11 . chapter 7
Love at last? So is this where Ginger is going to stay? :)
| acquanetta 10/15/10 . chapter 6
can you please write more
| MovieDreamer 10/11/10 . chapter 6
It's sad, she lost Beauty, Marybeth died and Delila passed away... I always found Ginger's depression heart breaking. Good job, just a few spelling errors but understandable.
| MovieDreamer 10/11/10 . chapter 5
I can not believe Marybeth died! :-O I was not expecting that
| MovieDreamer 10/11/10 . chapter 4
Awwww Ginger seems to be having a happy life
| MovieDreamer 10/11/10 . chapter 2
I do not know whether to like Marybeth or not because even though she saved Ginger... Ginger suffers even more later on. That shows good story telling :)
| Eric123 8/6/10 . chapter 6
not bad, keep it up!