Woah! Dude!

You have the exact same way I want to write this story! XD I haven't uploaded mine yet, but heyyyyyy this is pretty good :D I likes!

This is good, write MORE!

Can I tell you how much I love this story? I do. It has everything I wish the game did, and you expand on the dialogue beautifully. The characterization is spot on. I can't wait for the next chapter! :)

Yesss a chaos rings story! I'm still playing the game (starting ayuta's part) and I really like Escher's story the most with Musiea! I think u captured the characters pretty well and I like the fact how Escher teases musiea so much n they started to kno bout each other. And how musiea proves to him that she's also a warrior :D I'm looking forward to this. Update soon!

I really love this story and it is the seacond best stories i read of um can you translate that stuff on how to make a story in english because i didn't understand one!

This chapter went well. Can't wait for the next! XD

Ps. I like how we get to understand the story from both Musiea and Escher's perspective.

Omo This is absolutely AMAZING! Pretty please continue with this story. XD

Nice story. Can't wait for your naext update.