woah! is any killing Irial?

God damn,go Ani

Wow, I'm intrigued. Nice one-shot. You could add to it though if you could find the means. I'd love to read a second chapter if you could offer that. Well done :)

Wow, that was amazing. I wanted to know what happened there, too, and you wrote it perfectly. The characters were just right and... good job.

Oh... oh my... I shall be blushing furiously in my bunk. This was so beautifully intense without being explicit, and the ending... IRI. DON'T YOU DARE DIE.

Irial, Niall and Ari will forever be my favourite characters, and I love them all- but especially your portrayal of them. 3

Love, Bunyip.

Oh, please write more! I always wished the relationship between those two got more time in the limelight. I lurve them together, and you wrote it beautifully!

I loved it! When I read that part of the book, I was shocked! I wanted to know what would have happened there! And you wrote it! I love you! I like it very much! I think it would have been so!

Thanks to have written it! *_*

But I want a sequel! Pleaseeeeeeee

I CRAVE THIS! seriously, it rocks, please please please please! update it! evem just one more small chapter to tell what happens? :)

I love it. I read this part of radiant shadows today and I was gutted that we didn't get to hear how niall answered this question. Fantastic :)

I loved it. It seemed so mysterious and apt at the same time, I hope you write more .

It was great! I wondered what theyd say in response to that question. And you kept to the characters. A few typos, but overall it was great!