Cool you've updated! Look forward to more to this amazing story.

this has to be one of those stories you just cant put down thankyou for your imagination and dont stop writing this is good

Cute. I think I would have liked to see Rayne and Josef encountering a vamp in a real-world situation. It would have been cool to see how they would handle that. But aside from that, the story was wonderfully written. I'm putting this story and its prequel on my favorites list as well as my C2 Community Dark Sanctuary. Good Job.

Nice to know Josef is a force to be reckoned with. Nice song. Is that by a known artist or did you make it up?

A self-fulfilling prophecy. She saw a vampire and told them of her worry. Instead of preventing it, they practically made it happen. Love the cliffy.

Wow. Nice teeth. What is she?

Oooh. Evil cliffhanger.

Like the holo-butler. Ingenious.

That's an interesting dream. Cyber-Carpathian. Intriguing.

loved it espescely the whole cyber carpathien thing! tottaly and oncondishenaly loved it! gret work!

Very well written. The chapter was emotionally was exciting then sweet at the end. Very well done! Bravo!

Love the story. I'm so glad Rayne and Josef were reunited. This is truly a terrific story.

Clift hanger! I hate those. Great story so far. Very plausible! You have made Josef personality understandable. His elders are still stuck in the past. The story makes up good work. No more clift hangers please (smile). I look forward to the next chapter.

Hope Josef kicks some ass. They're all being so obstinate! I hope Rayne find some way of escaping them.

Update soon

DD18 x

Josef and Rayne are going to be reunited, right? God, I hope so. I'm not sure I could take it if they weren't. I hope Mikhail and the others see the truth. I really love this story and can't wait for you to update again.