That was so sad... Even sadder listening to River Flows In You by Yiruma...
:'( Great job, you really captured a lot of feeling in your story!

Wow, what an extravagant piece of writing. It is strong and heartfelt. But sometimes , the writing lets itself down, and i didn't see a need for the song you put in, if it was for length then i wouldn't worry because sometimes quality always exceeds quantity

It made me cry. That's rare.

/10

Gah, that's so sad! D : I love this song, and it goes realy well with matt and mello. good job -thumbs up- : )