That was kinda cool. Erek summoning demons...did you invent that mth yourself? Animorphs and demons...interesting mix.

Evil i tell you evil! Why aer you leaving it hanging AGAIN?

Good! Gonna read the rest now kay?

If you changed the concept around a little, I seriously think you could get this published. WONDERFUL Fic! :D

Wow. This was what I've been trying to write like for the longest time! During the fight scene, I was shivering! GREAT job! chants Keep it up! Keep it up! This is not a 10. It is a 100000000000000000000!

Your imagination is like ten times better than mine. ::grins:: How do you write stuff like this?

Please finish it!

Cool. I'd like to see more.

I really like this. I'm big in the whole magic thing. May I reccomend the Feist books? If you like this kind of stuff (magic, demons, etc) then they're right up you alley. Anyway, great story!

MORE, MORE, MORE, MORE, MORE! I crave more, I must have it, and you must provide it, please, I need mooooooooooooreeeeeeeee!

Ooo, funky chickens!

I like it. Definatly my style. And since i have already gained a reputation as a satanist, I might be able to help you out with some finer details. 1) Salt is a purifing thing in ancient lore. Sulpher would be more accurate. 2) from a Reader/writer's perspective, The 'old one' needed wings, claws, other demon stuff. Sorry. I am not flaming you. Just helping. To all readers of 'satanic temptations' (by me) I AM NOT A SATANIST!

Keep writing as much as you can!

Thumbs up! I especially like the subtle insertion of Kwannon.

Great start. Interesting concept.