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Reviews for: Her Unwelcome Surprise
Bells of Tomorrow 6/8/10 . chapter 1
Oh, wow! I wasn't expecting that one. Nice twist. It didn't feel forced, which you might expect with a pairing/discovery like that, but you did a good job at making it work, especially from Carla's perspective. Nice job.
SALJStella 6/4/10 . chapter 1
This was really good! I love your style of writing. And as horrible as this sounds, this does sound like something Turk would do... You've made him IC. And Carla's reaction was awesome, I really felt sorry for her. Love it! :D
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