I can't believe I neve read chapter two! YES please finish EPOV, nw I'm hooked and wanting more...lol. Goes o show...there are always three sides to every story...hers, his, and the truth!

Really loved this but was sad to see that the third part was never updated.

I hope you decide to finish this!

Loved it, great job!

whoa! you totally blew my mind...completely wasn't expecting any of it...great job!...lol )

AWEEEEESOME! I totally got fooled! HAHA That is good writing! :) 3 thumbs up :)

Aaahhh really want part 2, where is it? I want to know what happens between Edward and bella!

Omg this Is genius! Totaly caught me off gaurd!

Well damn, you certainly threw me for a six. I immediately assumed it was Bella. I'm not a fan of the Lauren character, but after thinking back on this story, I really felt for her. Damn Edward was a total prick. Good on her for getting her one up.

I feel soooo sorry for bella, he cheated on her with Lauren! At least with Edward an Lauren they were kinda both cheating on each other... Poor bella, the phrase 'once a cheater always a cheater' comes to mind when I think of what Edward did. I want part 2! :D

laura :) x

This was seriously good, it gave a whole new light to the characters and was really well written, loved it!

Wow!

Now that I know what's going on in his mind... well, I didn't hate him that much. I'm sorry he has to put up with a cheating girlfriend.

This must be the worst Edward I have read, ever.

It seems to me that she's already pregnant when Edward visits that last night(falling asleep, exhausted, pale) and since she finds out only one week later(that's too soon right?). That's a mean trick to play on someone even if he is sleeping around.

I love this. I hope you still do part two because I'd really like to see EPOV of the after engagement visit to Lauren.