totally awesome dude :o) so in character, bookmarking it so i can read more! and i'm really picky about ff too :op 3 It actually reads like a bones episode, you've got some talent :o)

Well done. Funny in character sexy.

More chapters please . ..

I LIKE! But why did you have to give them a room with two beds? Please have the room above leak, or something... *evil fangirl*

And just for the lulz, there's a Universal Studios Hollywood ad on the page. *easily amused*