I know I've said this before, but it's a real pleasure to see how much the quality of your writing has improved. Please keep up the good work! Just one little thing: the word "beau" should only be used as a synonym for boyfriend, not girlfriend. Anyway, it's just a tiny nitpick.

Also, I love the way Tenchi and Ryoko's relationship is developing. I look forward to more! Happy writings to you, and take care!

Excellent story