Really angsty ending. Loved it.

An Awesome read all through, keep 'em going...

excellent story, loved every minute

Seen the sequel and had to come back to remember what this one was all about. Well, it was sad, even though I like angsty stuff. But I KNOW you are "mature" regardless of your actual age and it's your choice what you write about. Since it's well written, I think I'll still enjoy it, especially since I remember some very "mature"(in the other sense) stuff about a closet...Grin. Keep them coming and it wouldn't hurt if they were, you know, getting slightly lighter in the angst department...Max and Logan need a break after all you had them suffer through ;-).

I did stay with you because I like your style of writing in general. I also thought the story idea was good.

However, either you're too young to know about love or you're hanging out with too many teens at that writer's site. I went there and high schoolers are running amuck. Angst, angst and angst. Very young.

Your writing is mature, I thought you were probably married. But your conclusion here is young.

I'm sticking with you because I think you've got it in you to be mature. Read Star24 and I don't mean her latest. That's too mature for you. Me too. Read John Doe and The Night Visitor by Moonshadow.

You are as good as they are, just younger. But then so am I. I think Michelle Drake is still in high school. Her story ideas are high school.

I'm can't write at all but I'm a great reader.

Keep up the good writing and don't take this as a criticism. What do I know. I can barely read. LOL.

CC

Arrgh! This was the last part ? There is still that small possibility she would come back if he let her go... Very powerful and emotional. Loved it. Have to go back and read it again.

Argh.. post the rest already! Damn cliffhangers.. ;-)

Can't wait to see what happens!

can't wait to see what happened to logan

Oooh...cliffhanger. Can't wait for more!

Wow...the emotion in these past two chapters is really something. Poor Asha... And you make Logan's illness seem so real and so terrifying with the way you describe things. Great job.

Awesome developments, awesome writing, awesome characterization...as usual :P Sorry these reviews are so short now...

That was great! Can't wait till you get the next chapter posted!

You have to help save Dark Angel! If you want the show to come back for season 3, write to and tell them what the show means to you!

Thank you for coming back to us.

I thought we lost you.

I enjoy your stories, please don't stop. We need you now, with Max and Logan, more than ever.

Thank you for all your Max and Logan stories.

It's been a long time, but I'm still reading and enjoying it a lot. Of course, I'd love for this to have a happy ending (happy for me/M/L, i.e.) but you write the story so well that I am totally captivated by the flow. I'm positive any ending you chose will be appropriate. Looking forward for more, please and SOON!