Will you explain the virus to me? I don't think I can understand... why does Leia have to get pregnant? Wouldn't her hormone levels be brought up just by sleeping with Han?

I read this story on another site and LOVED it. Such a sweet love story.

So this fic is nearly six years old, and I was horrified to realize that I've never bothered to review. I've come back to it many, many times, despite that I've moved on to reading and writing in other fandoms. Tonight I needed some good, solid Star Wars ficcage, and this was the first story I thought of. I love the characterizations here, and the situation is so real. Han needing to save Leia's life even at the expense of her own emotional well-being has always struck a chord with me. Beautiful, brilliant, and still solid after all these years.

Very hot, very racy. You've done it quite well! Nine out of ten! If only it could have been lnoger =)

dude ive been a sucker for this story (this is not the full thing!) for months. this is about the 10 time ive read it. still love it.

i liked it. there aren't very many good Leia/Han romances but this is one of the few good ones. your other fanfic (i think it was called loves fate) was good aswell .please write more leai/ han stories. i love them and there aren't very mnay of them.

I love this story, and I have a feeling I've read it somewhere before a long time ago...possibly on The Corellian Embassy. Anyway, good job!

I know you wrote and posted this story about umpteen years ago, but I just joined ff.net about a week ago, so I didn't come across this until now...

Very, very well done. This piece was sensitive, sweet, and most of all, realistic. You did a fine job with in the essence of the characters Lucas created while allowing your own voice to come through (a difficult job when dealing with characters of someone else's creation.)

Only a couple problems:
1. Proofread a little better. I know, I know, typos happen--but they got in the way of the story's flow at times.

2. Try not to have 2 characters speaking in the same paragraph--it can get a little confusing

3. Double space your paragraphs.

These are all little technical problems--you can work them out!

Ivy

I like this story a lot.

Good story I liked it :)

Really good. An interesting take on an interesting situation. I really enjoyed it. The way you expressed Han's thoughts was very unique!

Well, I've read a lot of fanfics from many different fandoms. For the most part, I dispise Star Wars fic because most of it is cheap, taudry, and just unnecessary smut. But, I was really pleased with this story. The reasoning behind Han's actions were justified by his fear of losing someone he cared so much about. I think it came across as beautiful and touching. Good job.

That was wel, different. Not in a bad way but certainly original thinking =). Can u please write a sequel because it can't just end there!
-> What happens????????????????????????????????????????????????????????/
Once again, different,original and all-over well written without any graphic terms.
See ya ,
*libby =)

Ok... don't take my word for this, because I'm ot in a place to review other authors since I get mostly bad reviews or none at all. :(
But, in my opinion, I loved it! It was a beautiful story about Han and Leia, and if they really loved each other, but not all lovey-dovey. I loved the internal conflict Han had to face about how he would show he loved her, by saving her life or hurting her. It was a great dramatic plot with best of all, a happy ending. You use good descriptions all the time, and that love scene really got my blood pumping! I'm about to read the sequel, and then I'm looking forward for you to write more!!!

cute story. gets a little specific there, but shows the true love that they have for each other, even if they won't admit it.