Ooo I loved this, I really did. The voices, the emotion...just great :)

Love

/Belker

i really like this one.

It's a very very interesting idea - I wish you would expand on it, though! However, for what you wrote, it makes a good one-shot, even if it leaves the audience wanting more. Great job and great concept!

Cool.

I am so very curious about what happened before and after this snapshot. Well done.

I'm intrigued! I'm very curious to find out more about how this story will play out! Can't wait to read more.

Wonderfully written! I love how you wrote Gibbs and Tony :)

What's going on with poor Tony... Gibbs will fix it, love your story please write more.

Oh please continue this :)

Love Jen

Fantastic story, poor Tony

I know I have told you this before, but it bears repeating. I can hear their voices when I read the words. If I didn't think these were good, they would have the voices from The Big Bang Theory. or if I thought they were bad, the voices from The Family Guy.

This is really, really good! :)

Hope you add more to this, I hated to see it end.

I really like your dialogue between Gibbs and Tony, in your other stuff too. But I wanna know where the voices come from! ;)

You've told an agonizing, poetic story with fantastic dialogue. Thank you for sharing.

Interesting