This was amazing. It almost made me cry. I loved it! Good job!

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What can one say to that? The piece realy says it all.

The story is wonderfuly writen and is believable. I have no doubt that Helen still loves, or at least cares deeply, for John and that, if he could gain control, that killing himself or geting someone else to do it would be one of his only ways out.

You are a very talented writer, never think other wise.

I cant wait to read more from you

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Mazz

sadest line, ""I never thought he would actually die,"

Hey there,

Sorry I've gotten a little behind in my fiction reviews the last couple days, they were piling up on me. LOL But I just wanted to dig myself out and say GREAT job. This story is really well done and I'm liking it. More soon please.

woah! I love, love it... too bad that you dont prolongue the stories, you know... you re a gr8 writter, very good really.

Try write a story with more chapters, and I promise you, that you will receive many, many reviews from me. thank you for sharing... be good