I guess I like this a bit, especially the parts in between, but there's one thing I dont understand. Does this take place before or after hgss chapter. Because I don't think Silver would take kindly to the fact Ariana is his mom considering...

SPOILER ALERT in case anybody hasn't red hgss chapter

...she tried to kill him and the rest of the johto trio

I love you

I love your story. The amount of personality you imbue into the characters as the story progresses is stunning. I hope you keep up the wonderful work.

Why haven't you continued this story in so long? It's amazing! Me too, when I saw Ariana's design I thought the same. She HAS to be Silver's mother. My connection of her and Mars was a bit different.

Anyways, I really like this story and I hope you continue it soon!

This is an interesting chapter. I would think Arinana would be Silver's mother, assuming by hair and eye color. When it comes down to it, Silver looks more like his mom then his father. But that will be my opion.

(Excuse my spelling, I have no spell checker. ;)

I just ramdomly found this story the other day and I like it :) I hope you update soon

Lol there was this theory that Ariana was the mother of Roark, Mars, and Silver. I thought it was funny. I don't really support Giovanni/Ariana, but I think it's pretty interesting.

Brilliant story so far, please update this soon.

*immediately flys to TV Tropes* I'll be back!
Anyhow, on to the review! I lol'd at everything. This is one of my favorite stories, due to the awesomeness. And Silver. XDDD

Silver's always cute. Mexico? Oh, I just came back from there! xD

*reads next chapter*

Hee-hee, Silver

Anyhow, poor Ariana, she just got pwned. xD *reads next chapter*

I support this ship; in my head-canon this is how it rolls!

x3 Yay, Silver He's adorable. *reads next chapter*

Damn that was so cute. Ha I have this hilarious mental image of Arianna dressed up in Giovanni's

scarf, hat and coat. And the part where Pertel offered to sell Giovanni chlorform I almost wet myself.

Your characterisation is awsome:)

and yes poor Silver.

Look forward to the next update:)

OMG, I just found this fan fic and I couldn't stop reading! It's amazing, great job! I hope you update soon!

Yay! Another chapter! I love the way that silver is always tired and now it's getting earlier and the characters are still brilliant! Keep Updating! The only other thing that I could think of adding is how old are they meant to be in the games? Especially if they were all around before Silver was born?