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Nintendo 2509 3/31/12 . chapter 2
This is such an awesomely erotic Naruto fanfic! In fact, this is actually the very first fanfic i have ever read in this website! i just had to read it the second time! It seemed that Akemi did not have much of a major role after all. Aw well, no boy friend for her!
Reishin Amara 2/15/12 . chapter 7
Frikin Epic...
Megatyrant 10/14/11 . chapter 2
I sense a "be careful what you wish for" statement hidden somewhere in here... :)
Negative-Z 10/3/11 . chapter 7
It was surprisingly...well...serious. Fun and naughty, sure, but not nearly as absurd as I was expecting. I guess that's the fine line between perv and fetishist there ;p A very fun read.
C.A.M.E.O.1 and Only 8/25/11 . chapter 7
LOL, really gives off the feeling of cheap hentai...In a fun way! I mean, I COULD NOT take ANYTHING in this seriously, but that's the fun of this fic!
CrazyNinjaPenguin 8/25/11 . chapter 7
This was a very nice, very exciting conclusion to this story.

Seriously, the final fight scene was a lot of fun. I don't think I could have ever even imagined something quite like that, but that's what makes it awesome.

The ending was cute. It's a little sad that Sakura didn't get to keep her breasts though. She really did sound hot that way.
Rahkshi500 8/25/11 . chapter 7
Well that was fun and wild ride, wasn't it? The battle was sexy(well for Sakura's side), but the ending was less than what I expected. The Land of Milk is a fun place to be if it were real in the Naruto universe.
masterart 4/17/11 . chapter 6
wow that cool story i wonder what happen next
byebye360 4/17/11 . chapter 6
wow
Turqcoyce 4/9/11 . chapter 6
Omg, this is sexy. Really, it is. Chapter 6 is phenomenal. I'm new to the whole lactation and breast expansion thing, and I'm completely awed. Not only is it sexy, but you wrote it so well too. I'm so glad I stumbled across this! There's plot and I love that! Seriously, the whole Sakura screwing Ino with her breast was... it was phenomenal and definitely made me blush. I've read this chapter over and over and I can't get enough. Loved the threesome, the milk techniques (for both fighting and sexual uses, tho I assume these women must be topless to use these techniques? lol), and I look forward to you adding Anko into the mix. I'm on the edge of my seat. Thank you so much! ;)
Writing Ninja 4/3/11 . chapter 6
Well this doesn't look good for sakura, at the end of course everything else was awsome. As for the Bleach story well it should be interesting to see what you do with it after this new Arc. :-)
Dumbledork 4/1/11 . chapter 6
Why don't you add 'Naruko' while you're at it? Would probably be funnier.
Rahkshi500 4/1/11 . chapter 6
Wow, this a lot of fun to read. Milk techniques that are used for many different purposes and Sakura sure took advantage of it. And what's with those black veins on Chiushi's chest? Anyway, this was a very erotic chapter, probably one of the best you've written.
C.A.M.E.O.1 and Only 4/1/11 . chapter 6
Hmmm...YAAY! AN UPDATE!...AND FREE PORN!...LOL, I STILL find this erotically amusing!
CrazyNinjaPenguin 3/31/11 . chapter 6
Truly excellent.

This was exciting and erotic and just really sexy, and all in a just wonderfully creative way.

A true pleasure to read.

And I'm curious to learn what happens next in the story.
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