  Joe B 4/22/12 . chapter 48 That was weird but very entertaining! Excellent job! |
| Joe B 4/21/12 . chapter 47 Excellent chapter! You know, this story keeps on getting more and more like the original dragon ball series Akira Tori-Yama created way back in 1982! Except it takes place years after Goku, Vegeta, Yamcha, Bulma, Chichi, Videl, Pan, Piccolo, Korin, Tien, Chaotzu,Trunks, Bulla, Goten, and Gohan had been dead! Anyway it is so awsome! Please write as many chapters as possible to keep this story going as much as possible! |
| Joe B 4/20/12 . chapter 45 Fantastic! That chapter was interesting! Excellent job! |
| Joe B 4/18/12 . chapter 43 As a little silly as the ending really was, this chapter was really awsome! |
| Joe B 4/17/12 . chapter 40 Excellent job with this chapter! I really enjoyed it completely! |
| Joe B 4/16/12 . chapter 39 Excellent chapter! I will be moving on to the next chapter! |
| Joe B 4/7/12 . chapter 30 This story was just okay! I mean sure most of it was impressive, however the whole penis thing needs to be taken out of there! This is my opinion as a fan! |
| Joe B 4/6/12 . chapter 28 "So far so good and eggcellent!" Get it, because easter is coming on sunday! So I switched it up and said Egg-cellent job! Normally I would have used the word Excellent instead of Eggcellent! So have an awesome easter break and have some fun in college and good luck! |
| The M Legend 2/4/12 . chapter 20 Very nice. Loved the action very much ;-) |
| The M Legend 2/4/12 . chapter 63 Hey plz add the next chapter ;-(. Waiting for it for a long time :) . |
 TheGodfather93 11/30/11 . chapter 63This is a really good story, one of the best I've read. Please update soon. |
| Son Goku Fan 8/25/11 . chapter 62 When are more chapters going to be posted
And nice story but it's a bit close to Dragon Ball |
| Son Goshen 7/27/11 . chapter 61 I'm really interested in this thing, so don't you dare throw it away! Write more soon please! As soon as you're computer is fixed, of course.
I think you're staring at my name right now! I didn't steal it from you, I swear! I just found this today... My name is actually a Chinese name, altered slightly into English. Hehe... |
| jjgp1112 7/19/11 . chapter 51 I've decided to just take a mini-hiatus until I sort out my computer issues. Kinda need it, considering how frequently I used to update :p. But don't worry, I'm gathering ideas, and trust me, when a real threat comes I already know a way of dealing with Android 18 *winks* |
| Moi 7/19/11 . chapter 61 Too bad there won't be any good threats to the earth for a while because 18 is still faaaaar ahead of everybody else. But, I wonder whether gosu And retasu are stronger than Krillin yet. Update soon |
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