   BGlanders 12/13/04 . chapter 1Great story. I've read most of your work, and so far it's all enjoyable. Keep it up! |
| DigiDestined of Courage 3/6/02 . chapter 1 Decent. Keep up the good work! |
| Crash 2/16/02 . chapter 1 Heh. Theoretical AreodynamicsA Batwing. Clever. Nice story. Great one-liners. |
| Mouse Pirate 2/15/02 . chapter 1 aaaw, that was sweet. great story. |
| AssassinGalaxia 2/13/02 . chapter 1 Nice. Very nice. |
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