is there a specific song this was too?
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really good story, i don't know how you do it but your stories almost always bring me to tears

...I think this kind of brought tears to my eyes. I don't know how you do it, but I think this is one of the most beautiful oneshots I've ever read, just the unfairness of it all makes me sad.

That was so sad /3 omg

I actually thought that the song was 重话, but then, thanks to sasusakulover's review, I was like "it's the revelation!" (O.O)

Soooo sad. Sniff

That was beautiful. I actually cried officially the second story that made me cry. Just awesome job. :')

This made me cry. It was so, so beautiful and I feel like I've been gutted right now. I lost an uncle to cancer just last year, and when I was eleven, I thought I was going to lose my grandpa to cancer... Just thinking about it hurts, ya know?

I guess both our boys like to share awesome Chinese songs haha. At first, I thought you were talking about Tong Hua because that was the song that I was shown. But then I googled your story title, and was like darn I guess not. I like Mouse and Rice, it's sweet. Have you listened to Bu De Bu Ai? It's amazing song too.

This is the second time I read this.

And I just... Just... I've never lost anyone dear to me because of cancer, the most I've had to suffer was when I was eight and my grandfather had some sort of cancer that was easily handled as well as open-heart surgery. I had nightmares-grotesque nightmares and I was only eight.

But this...

This makes me feel so much pain and sadness and I wish I could do this. This is why I love your writing so much and I'm just going to continue to cry now because wow my heart has... has obliterated.

For idiots out there who think this song is (童话) fairytale,u guys should be ashamed with yourselves...the correct song is (老鼠爱大米) mouse and rice...though the correct translation should be mouse LOVE rice...Nvm..I am Singaporean and knows Chinese so belive me when I say the song name is true...

You made me cry tears of joy and Sadness *sobs*

I feel so terribly devastated for Sasuke in this story. When the moment of death for Sakura came, you portrayed it so beautifully, and with such little words. Simple sentences such as "time stood still" just got me to the edge of tears. I could feel the tragedy Sasuke was going through—given his mother also died in a similar way and he knew what was going to happen all along—and the end. God, the end. "Soundlessly, he let her go." It's just so wonderful and saddening at the same time. Your stories are always emotionally effectual but this one was so, so utterly real. :)

I'm really crying right now. This story reminds me of the pain of losing my grandmother. It's extremely painful and it makes me wonder which is more painful, when you were there during their last breath (like me) or being away

Very good story

I can't really count, how many times i've read and cried on this story...
And btw the video is fairytale by michael wong...and the song is tong hua, guang liang

This was really sad. My grandma died of cancer when I was only a few years old. I truly love this story!

I can clearly feel something gripping my heart, to the point when it hurts too much for me not to cry. I was a very finely written fiction, just like most of yours. I may not be one of those who comment often, but do believe that I read each and every fictions about Sasuke and Sakura you have authored.
I love the straightforwardness in your writing. It's simple, clean, and close to the heart. Whether it is a fantasy or a tragedy, your fictions have the power to lure people in and keep them in your imaginary World (a World where SasuSaku can actually happen). I also love how I can sometimes see vivid images when reading your fictions. It may not happen often, but when it does, it always feel good.
One thing I'd like to ask for this story. It reminded me a lot of a Chinese song called "Tong Hua" (Fairy Tale). Have you ever heard it or seen its music video? If you haven't, I highly recommend it.
Keep up the good work. I will always be an enthusiastic reader to your fanfictions.