Lovely composure. And the soft words, the slight pull on the emotions. You're a quality writer. :)

Very raw. I felt for both of them. Last part was awesome - you are never over your first love - but you move on. Great job!

Truly brilliant! Fabulous us of language and perfectly captured characters. Loved it!

5/5

absolutly fantastic tho a bit short as it was so well written

*grins*

ah well

:P

I LOVE IT! I ACTUALLY CRIED!

Dera Tara,

I am so glad I chose this fic of yours to read. I am a big fan of all things Xander and Spike and Buffy in gerneral. (In fact I knida' use my Spike-voice for Drake too :) )

I was eating a cookie this morning while reading this, and seriously nearly choked when you (Spike) called Xanders dad a minger. XD

I love this fic so much, it's the perfect h/c really. Normally I avoid songfics like the plague, but I think I'm gonna go download this one. THe words sound like something I'd like. It fits in really well with the fic as well. Here's a thought; do you pick a song you like and then write a fic around it or do you write first and then try to find lyrics that fit?

Thank you very much for reviewing my fic by the way, the next chapter will be up very soon. (I knew I should have finished the damn thing before posting, but i got impatient. :)

cg./

beautifully written. great job.

Lovely. Quite lovely.