This is a good piece!

Oh my. That was so beautiful. I wish I knew what happened after he was released. This was so well written and so original. You should try writing some stories that aren't fanfiction. I'm sure they would be fabulous. Keep up the good work and lovely writing :)

Creepy... but good. Creepily good. I like it.

Wow. This was such sad story but so engaging! I've read a number of your stories lately and your characterisations of Draco are so unique and while different from his character in the books, it always becomes so real and believable through your fantastic story telling!

Great work and i'm looking forward to more stories from you :)

That was a really well written story. Just the graphic killing of the spider and him eating it kind of creeped me out... But still, wonderful fic.

Fantastic, it was ... I haven't words. Thank you very much for it.

A very, very interesting read and haunting too. Great job!

I'm confused. So was she real or not?

very interesting. i've never read a story with type of plot before. although briefly mentioned, i can totally relate with what hermione was going through in her real life. not being able to find anything to say to your friends, especially your best friends, is tough. good work:)

Interesting, completely new idea and brilliantly executed. Haunting, well-written, imaginative, a bit creepy and sadistic, and altogether very beautiful. The beginning was amazing; the perfect way to begin this story. The end was better, though, I think. I love endings that have an air of finality to them, but still leave things off hanging.

A new favorite for sure!

Weaver

Intense and surreal, this story was one brilliant read. Thank you very much.

I really enjoyed this, thank you for writing. I snickered when the email alert came in: Harry Potter: Queen of Heaven.

this was great it was extremely well written i couldnt beleive it great awesome

ooo love it

Pretty, loved it!