|Reviews for Fraternizing 101|
| Karama9 6/8/10 . chapter 2
Awhh... that was so sweet... it's always nice when those two enjoy a bicker-free and disaster-free moment. That being said, I still can't help but wonder when it's going to go south.
| TinySprite 6/8/10 . chapter 2
Anyone else seeing a disguised bunch of greenshirts tailing them? I can't be the only one...Love the touching conversation moments and poor Beach Head. Feminine clothing can get so confusing, can't it?
| Ghanie 6/7/10 . chapter 2
Next please! :D
| zenbon zakura 6/7/10 . chapter 2
10$ beach eats the restaurant steak stock out of stock and barely manages to squeeze through the bill with his credit card. and then cover girl drifts into a parking space of a 7 11 for some soda before drifting into the pit motor pool
| CrystalOfEllinon 6/5/10 . chapter 1
For some reason, I forgot to sign in when I reviewed this...I'll claim sleep deprivation.
Anyway, I repeat what I said. Disembowelments AFTER salad course, facepalm, male brains shutting off proves the dress is a winner, happy dance:)
| Lady Jaye1 6/5/10 . chapter 1
Aww...hopefully nothing goes too awry (this IS Cover Girl and Beach Head we're talking about.) I loved Scarlett acting like a big sister, Flint being nice and helpful for once, and the fact that the date is an open secret.
Flint's reaction to seeing a cleaned up Beach in civvies made me smile. I'm sure at least some people will be trying to call Beach on the comm, so I look forward to seeing Flint handle the pranksters if you decide to write that.
| Simon Frank 6/4/10 . chapter 1
Incredible beginning, love how you managed to perfectly add the other Joes' reactions to Beachead's appearance to the story, not surprising though considering your past work, can't wait to see more soon sure it'll be great.
| Strapakai 6/4/10 . chapter 1
Great first chapter!
How nice of Scarlet to show up to help BH get dress.
And the whole part about protection! ROFL
I got this image of BH coming back to his room to find a box of condoms on the bed with a post-it note stuck to it :"protection".
| slapshot22 6/4/10 . chapter 1
I love it! Everyone knows and it's a big production, exactly how BeachHead doesn't want it! :) BeachHead in town well, we already know that something disastrous is bound to happen. Poor town. He may need the guns and knives more than the um, other protection. I can already foresee a call from Private Williams on the comm link. That kid has a death wish. Great work!
| PhantomEmpress 6/4/10 . chapter 1
awwwww, the first date! i can't wait for more. i hope it goes well, but i somehow sense some antics are going to be pulled...
| Karama9 6/4/10 . chapter 1
I find it so sweet that everyone knows about the date but even Duke and Flint aren't giving him a hard time. Be honest, here... did Cover Girl do all the intimidating herself, or did Snake Eyes and Scarlett help? :)
Nice start, can't wait to read the actual date! I'm a bit worried at how much of a disaster it's likely to be, but who knows? Maybe I'm wrong.
| susan 6/4/10 . chapter 1
maybe beach head hasn't dated much and might be nervious. he can use the help anyway ')
please keep writing ') ')
| Ghanie 6/3/10 . chapter 1
I am glad to finaly read this! Hope to read the next chapter soon!
| Guest 6/3/10 . chapter 1
No, no. You save the disembowelments until after the salad course. EVERYONE knows that. "Shakes head sadly."
BeachHead's obliviousness makes me giggle. Protection? I'm good, ah got my 45. an' extra clips, and knives if things get to close-up fighting...
Facepalm moment, right there. Along with the assumption that they could keep anything secret on that base.
And you know it's a good dress when it manages to completely shut off all language centers in a man's brain. Just saying.
I'm so happy you posted this! Happy dance! Happy dance!
| zenbon zakura 6/3/10 . chapter 1
you can't disembowel people before dinner but you can after wards