lovely.

Aw... that was very sad! It was very descriptive, but a little short, but it was still very good! I really liked it, and keep writing!

hey, another good piece of writing if I may say so, you did really well describing the emotions without getting tangled up in too much detail. I think that you should have explained how he got in the city but other than that it was a very powerful story, you did great with Cloud's passion and regret.

Good....I found your new name. Anyways, I liked this story.....I never played FF7, but I know about Aeris....You captured the emotion quite well.
~Ra'akone

I've never played Final Fantasy, but this is wonderful writing! If you can ever apply this kind of thing to a storyline that I know, I will be completely enraptured!

Poor Cloud.......good fic though, but.....poor Cloud! You can almost feel the pain and love that he felt.

*sobs* sniff...sniff....I'm so touched... The way you described Cloud's emotions was just perfect! I don't believe I've ever read a story that features the characters in their old age, it provides some variety from the usual fics.

this is a different take on Aeris' death... that's what makes it original. I like it, and I like your choice of words. Good job!

Hey... I think that this is really good. :)