Ahh! Most adorable ending evar. And I am totally impressed with how you wrote the being-shot part. Cool beans, dude.

I'm halfway between laughing and smiling. Overall, quite well written, and an interesting idea. Nice work.

It's very good, a perfect twist from fluff to drama. I loved Espo's remarks too :). Great story!

don't know how I missed this one. Great story.

plz write more

I'm sure I've read this before, but I never said the whole "man what a fantastically fitting way for their relationship to start" comment before. Is a continuation still in the works? After Fallout I'm wondering when we'll see either a sequel, or another long story from your awesome pen. I know I'd love an occasionally M sequel, but not all great stories require continuation.

Anywho, thanks for sharing this!

C

Wow, I love this one-shot. Very cute...and deceiving. :D

I think this would make a great multi-chap fic ;)

all i have to say is... WHERE IS CHAPTER 2!

MOREEEE

This was just briliant! The first paragraph I didn't realize what exactly was going on, but I really liked how the story unfolded. Lovely little fic! :D

LOVE it! What a great scene set up that had me fascinated and confused - very original idea! And well executed and written to boot. :)

Nessy

oh my god, AMAZING and oh so sweet, loved it!

Wow, this is very well done. I had to do a double take when Esposito appeared. I thought it was a dream. then I looked back and it was all there.

Nice job!

This is short and sweet as is, but if you do add more to it later, I'd be interested in reading where it goes. Love the way its written, especially at the beginning.