ASDFGHJKLLKJHGFD! GAH! SO CUTE! I had always wondered about her name and what implications the mangaka may have had behind it! The way you wrote their relationship in this is so adorable! X3

this is so cute :3

lovely concept there

Awwwwwwwwww!

So cuuuuute!

IT was so sweet! I really liked that.

very cute! im falling in love with this manga at the moment and your fanfic was just CUTE! (please insert fangirl squeal here)

Great Story! Love this one and I hope that you do get to write another chapter for it. Keep up the great work.

Awwwn

That was so sweeeeeeet

I luved it!

Please write more ShirayukixZen

Pwease?

That's a very sweet story indeed. The characterization is pretty well done and I love sappy stories. XD