|Reviews for Legend of Mana: Book One:The Jumi Clan|
| heisuke28 1/3/12 . chapter 3
this is really nice :))
so which mission is next? I guess it's the blue eyes core? or esmeralda? I'm excited for the next chapter! Keep it up :D
| Useless Dreamer 1/9/11 . chapter 2
Wonderful. I can't wait to see the next one. Esmeralda is the next one, right? Hopefully you'll add in some more drama. It always felt strange that no one comments on the fact that you just lost the person you swore to protect as a knight.
| Green Bunny 6/4/10 . chapter 2
I like this story but I do wonder when you'll mention Rubens? Still, keep up the good work. I'm liking this a lot.