Oh my goodness, I wish they included this in the manga or anime...I bet the look on Lucci's face was priceless!

This nearly made me cry. i love Garp and Ace's relationship because it seems so complicated. You portrayed it very well here.

...Damn.

I would've LOVED to see that.

O.O

...Ah...good game of Pokemon, I'd take it, then...?

HAW! HAW!

I can SO see that happening!

D'AAAAAAAAAWWWWWW! I LOVE THE WHITEBEARD CREW!

...:D...?

Of course he got the letter...Right...?

Shanks and Mikawk. Two more bother-like rivals that'll always be buds no matter what side they're on...They just seem like that

Hear hear! HEAR HEAR!

I love the Whitebeard pirates. I really, truly do. They're like family to me as much as the Straw Hats are, and we (fans) haven't even known them as long or as well...But...Whitebeard was like Luffy, you know. Guys like that...you just love them. You've gotta be a bigot if you don't. How can you NOT? For all of this, ALL of this, to be because of...

...THAT man...

...I hope he knows that the deepest depths of Davy Jones' locker, and Hell itself, are reserved for traitors and mutineers! Especially those who kill FAMILY! NAKAMA!

Rest in peace, Whitebeard.

Rest in peace, son of D.

...I'll really miss you guys...

...Very well written. Brings tears to the eyes, aye. I really, truly wonder what Garp will do, now.

This, in my honest opinion, is good enough of a chapter to be CANON. Kudos, man. Ku. Dos.

Oh, you absolutely epic person! I think I love you right now. XD Poor Ace... The abuse he takes for the sake of hilarity! I hope you write more of these and will be looking forward to them.

I have nothing more to say than...

"Poor Ace." :D

Okay, that, THAT was great. xD I said I enjoyed the other chapters? Now THIS one I couldn't stop laughing! XD

I had to review on this chapter, too. :P

"YOU ATE A BABY!"

Priceless. :D I also *really* liked the chapter with Shanks, Beckman, Roux, and Mihawk. x) I'm more of a person that's interested in humor than angst and stuff, and even though I already know Ace dies, I still felt like I'd be finding more spoilers if I read the chapters with him in it. o_o I read the one, 'Bet' I think it was titled, where Ace was dressed up all 'prettyful.' XD

Oh my gosh, I just HAD to review on THIS chapter! Oh man, oh man, oh man! That's GREAT! xD -starts laughing hysterically-

caused by a canon ball, curtsey of the Marines

You meant 'cannon' ball and 'courtesy', right? ) ANYWAYS, I want to finish the rest of these one shots (hopefully soon) sometime! Tomorrow, maybe? (Doubtful. xD) I liked these first two chapters a lot - awesome start so far.

Oh, almost forgot: in this chapter you put 'adventured' where I think you meant 'adventures.' Yay for typos. XD (Doesn't everybody just hate then? :3)