would this 'Nagisa' be *you*, loved it !

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lol, my god that was such a good story! I really like it! You should add some more chapters to it! I especially like how it says in the end that she's a fan fic writer. *grins and smiles* My fav char is Shuichi, yeah thought i should say that. I love grav! It rocks. Keep on writing stories, you seem to be good at it.

-Shu and Yuki lover

The occasional odd self insert can be a good thing, and it certainly seems to benefit Shuuichi! Heh heh. I must say, your fanfic was quite cute!

P.S. I don't blame you for wanting Ryuichi. God knows we all do (or at least all of us fanfic writiers/readers...)

haa that rocks, Ashura _ i love it hehehe...damn though, how come you only wrote ONE Gravi fic? ;_; you know i love your writing hehehe...

hee, guess who _ (ok it's like you take an "a" and put it with a "d" and..stuff, and an "i", so on so forth..._)

*snickers* That was cute...a self-insert can be a fun, playful thing if it's done correctly - great job!

Sugoii ! Great story. Keep it up _

Hehehe... kwaii kwaii write more! Very good!

*blink* Well, this is a better Self-Insert than most, since you're actually willing to admit it's a self-insert. But point being, YOU SHOULD HAVE WRITTEN THE LEMON! ... okay. I'm done now. _

Lol, that was so funny! Hehe, maybe I should become a fanfic writer too... especially if I can get Ryuichi-sama into my bed!

XD! Never been one to like self-inserts... but this was just great _! Ahehehe! Keep up the good work!

As you said, that's the good thing of being a fanfic writer, you can do whatever you want and they have to accept it without even knowing that it's our will and not their! *maniacal laugh* (evil look towards all the bishonens from Slam Dunk that had suffered her will and all the rest she think to play with soon)

LOL! Hilarious! Are you going to elaborate on Yuki's later activities? *suggestive wink*

*snickersnort*

That was so cute.

BTW Kumagorou is not just a stuffed animal, he's a way of life. _

that was very kawaii