oohh wonderful fanfic! I just adore it!

Aw! . that waz so cute! lolz Ok! me go now to read Tokyo Hill:Primary! heh heh xD

I love it. It so cute! Come on people review you know you want to.

This is a wonderful story! and it's so surprising you've only gotten one review. It's realistic for the most part, and I could really see the characters. The dialogue was was really great. You told a great story concisely and without many frills, something I wish I could do. With a story like this.I would end up stretching it out to an immense length, and then end up abandoning it.

I started reading this some time ago, and for some reason, I don't remember what, I had to stop. I never got back to it, oddly enough, because I liked it a lot. It's well written, and the thing that I think strikes me the most is the realism of it all. It seems natural, like I could watch it all play out in front of my eyes without question as to why this happened, or if that would actually occur in an ordinary day.

I love your writing. It's wonderful _

Very good story!