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Reviews for: Chi Trova
Hieiko 4/5/12 . chapter 1
Love it, they're adorable and in character. And I also love that there's not just Gokudera and Yamamoto, but Ryohei too. :)
Dreaming Rain 9/12/10 . chapter 1
This was a really fun story to read, as well as heart-warming at the same time. Brilliant job!
Reidluver 6/13/10 . chapter 1
I luv it! :) So rare to find actual FRIENDSHIP fics on here. _ Pretty much everything is a romance it seems, and that gets annoying after a while. :( This is the mafia, dangit! I want action! You did an amazing job capturing their personalities and they were perfectly IC.
OnlyIntuition 6/11/10 . chapter 1
Aww this is adorable :) I could imagine the whole entire thing in my head xDD It seemed so right for the two of them! xD haha :) Definitely captured their personalities perfectly.
melissa42 6/6/10 . chapter 1
This seems like something that could have happened in the manga-it's that good. Great job at capturing these three characters!
Aunty Soshul 6/5/10 . chapter 1
OMFG. I loved it. XD This really captures canon 8059 (and by 8059 I mean friendship) and everything flowed smoothly- none of that awkward character behavior that makes your cringe. And I'll have to say this was amazing! If this is how you've started writing, I can't wait to see more stories from you!
Aunty Soshul 6/5/10 . chapter 1
OMFG. I loved it. XD This really captures canon 8059 (and by 8059 I mean friendship) and everything flowed smoothly- none of that awkward character behavior that makes your cringe. And I'll have to say this was amazing! If this is how you've started writing, I can't wait to see more stories from you!
Taort 6/5/10 . chapter 1
So, I completely adore this. Your Ryohei was pretty much /perfect/ (ahaha, hello character bias), and I loved that even if he wasn't the main point, he was still a pivotal point to the story. Gokudera's prickliness made him just as adorable and slappable as he ought to be, and Yamamoto's- yeah basically just everything about this was exactly as it should have been. I liked the note that it ended on, and the note that it started on, and the fact that for once, no one is gay or gender-swapped (which makes me look like a total hypocrite, I know).

My favorite thing about this whole thing, though, was that it was so natural and obvious it felt like this had already happened. There was nothing iffy or alien or out of place about it. They're just being friends, and worrying about each other because they're still idiots.

Uh, basically. GOOD JOB.
WinterLover147 6/5/10 . chapter 1
This was really good! :)

And they were very much in character, I actually read this a couple more times it was that awesome. Please write more stories.
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